Hi! I am from Grade 7.Ā I am super excited to share my fantacy story it with you! I would love to hear your kind reviews and suggestions to help me become a better writer.Ā
Thank you for reading my blog!
This is so good, and the content is so clear iām very happy you are reading. This is this is the best story that I had ever read that read
This is the best write up which I have ever Read in my life.this story is giving a fell like we are seeing a anime.
The suggestion that I want to give is there may be images added in this write up.
Thank you.
I love this presentation which is made by your self š
Stories very good I think you did very hard work for doing you
Wonderful imagination and creative storytelling! Keep writing āØ
I like it his hard work itis so pretty
Really nice fantasy and creativity in this story.
Stories very good I think you did very hard work for doing you
Really nice fantasy and creativity in this story.
Fantastic creativity. Mind blowing description to the characters. Loved the hero entry. Great imagination Kesu.
Great imagination and creativity. Mind blowing description to the characters and detailing. Loved the hero entry part. Keep going Kesu. Proud of you!!
Very interesting but it would be better if you add more designs and illustrations to intract the reader
The story was good,hope you would become a good writer in the upcoming years.
Very good