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Nikhileshwar’s “the mystery of the magical book”

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Hi friends! I am from Grade 6, and this is my fantasy story. I hope you all enjoy it!

 
11 Responses
  1. Litharshana
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    Your story is very good but go deep into the story and make the readers enjoy and also improve your handwriting to make it a good story

  2. SWETHA
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    Hi Nikhilesh!
    the idea of you story was nice and it kept the readers engaging . one small suggestion,Kindly refrain from overwriting or making corrections in between lines. So it would look much presentable .
    Thank you!

    1. G. Lohit
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      Your story is very good . And your word choice is fantastic .you made the readers enjoy the story. you want to improve more on presentation.it is a amazing story. The ending is very nice and creative

  3. Yadav
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    Nice and a mysterious story it would have been nice if add some illustrations like the tree and the bungalow keep it up

    1. Arjun
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      Hi Nikhilesh !
      IT is a perfect story for mystery and teamwork your story line is very nice actually the theme is really good the tree idea is actually insane and you want avoid over writing.
      Thank you.

    2. Arjun
      Reply

      Hi Nikhilesh !
      IT is a perfect story for mystery and teamwork your story line is very nice actually the theme is really good the tree idea is actually insane
      Thank you.

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